7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-28 20:37:06contact the webmasters and have the story deleted then rewrite it properly using a good editor and PARAGRAPHS.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-29 13:11:17Paragraphs, 2 spaces after the period at the end of a sentence. . Blowjob porn . …anonymous readerReport 2011-06-25 08:08:34You NEED to use spacing too hard to readRobby1223Report 2011-06-24 20:51:45Thanks, much appreciated. it is the emotional aspects of the age rather then anything else. I already have most of the second done, it’s about 1.5x as long, and sorry about the ages, I will def/ fix that and the genre its under. Good Story Good Job, XNXX is not short of space so please space, makes it easyier to read and understand. 18 is a little young to raise a teenager, 22 would have been better, she can be the Girl Friend or what ever else she needs to be.
