Read some books so that you can see just how a story should be written. Blowjob sex It’s the grammar that’s bad. I am a “Redneck” and that doesn’t require you to be stupid, your poor attempt at trying to write “Redneck dialogue” was absolutely horrible, why it made me pucker up tighter’n a bulls ass at fly time!! Here’s a tip you spelled “cavron” incorrectly it’s actually cabron. It’s also a cliff hanger which I personally don’t like. It’s also a cliff hanger which I personally don’t like. When you’re confident that your story is as good as it’s going to get, post it. For someone who calls himself(?) a grammar Nazi, you suck at English. Yes, you can go look that word up, too.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-21 22:45:08That’s strange you call yourself a “Redneck” yet you use Spanish, albeit quite poorly.
