Pathetic.Anonymous readerReport 2015-03-08 13:55:55Picky, picky, picky. And what is with all the damn commas where they’re not needed?«12345» That, along with everything else (including the atrocious grammar) ruined the entire plot for me. Blowjob sex I was enjoying them until I got to this one. Just wish i was In on itAnonymous readerReport 2016-01-19 15:23:51Rhiannon57, you have everything you need to improve your writing to a professional level, except: a spell checker, a grammar checker, AND A GOOD EDITOR. That, along with everything else (including the atrocious grammar) ruined the entire plot for me. 192 comments«12345»steveblastsReport 2020-03-21 01:42:20Hot three way action. The author just threw her credibility out the window. If that wasn’t enough of a disappointment, truth or dare gets thrown into the tired mix. CoachAnonymous readerReport 2015-06-27 04:47:47I’ve just recently been reading the author’s running story line. Worst of all was the reverting of Brian’s wife into a teasing, immature, bisexual bitch. And what is with all the damn commas where they’re not needed?«12345» Worst of all was the reverting
