I suggest you write by planning story using a story board to outline the flow, then filling in sections, finally editing for consistency, grammar and spelling
1/10 for story, + 2/10 for potential, + 1/10 for your audacity to publishJAMES ROTHERYReport 2011-06-06 17:09:40fucking shit this story is not incest its fucking lameAnonymous readerReport 2009-08-16 01:20:18i dont get it is this a joke. Blowjob sex maby 5-10 lbs is fat, and im not super muscled either. maby 5-10 lbs is fat, and im not super muscled either. 2 your bare feet are squeezing her neck – again WTF? I suggest you write by planning story using a story board to outline the flow, then filling in sections, finally editing for consistency, grammar and spelling
1/10 for story, + 2/10 for potential, + 1/10 for your audacity to publishJAMES ROTHERYReport 2011-06-06 17:09:40fucking shit this story is not incest its fucking lameAnonymous readerReport 2009-08-16 01:20:18i dont get it is this a joke.
