And to Agothgreendaygirl, keep up the good work sweetie.anonymous readerReport 2012-11-09 09:16:20Had heaps of potential you could be an amazing writer but you jujmped around you moved the story along to fast details were good during sex but thats about it you should slow it down also you threw in some unnessacary stuff like the part about battle scalrs and whats his faces back you shoulodnt mention any details unless your going to fully explain them also the main should have had more background theme is good and the stroy could be good but sime of it dosent make sense but overall a good story didnt reallly make me horny but it was fun to read«1» Punctuation? Blowjob sex I doubt. And check out the rest of her stories. “You should slow it down” Maybe you should, dude. And check out the rest of her stories. Punctuation?
