Some constructive criticism though, don’t abuse the thesaurus, your prose seems very unnatural when you work in all those fucking synonyms.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-25 15:34:55I fucking died
Best XNXX story of 2013anonymous readerReport 2013-02-25 15:06:47If I may be honest, this isn’t really one of your best…sort of like a pornographic take on that film Jack Frost.«1» Very, very, nicely done!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-08-24 05:48:47Jesus fuck what the shit, It’s like Lovecraft made a porno for his blind brother. Great characters and plot.Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-26 05:20:31Simply delightful!!! Blowjob sex Great characters and plot.Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-26 05:20:31Simply delightful!!! I disagree with the comment about the synonyms, I found them both charming and witty!!!! I’d say it’s a fucking joke but the amount of work and detail put into this shit is mindboggling. 5 comments«1»Norton XReport 2014-07-16 07:32:24Definitely a very well-written sex story. Great characters and plot.Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-26 05:20:31Simply delightful!!! 5 comments«1»Norton XReport 2014-07-16 07:32:24Definitely a very well-written sex story. Some constructive criticism though, don’t abuse the thesaurus, your prose seems very unnatural when you work in all those fucking synonyms.anonymous
