Also remember quotation marks, those make it easier to read and know what is dialogue and what is not. 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-06-29 03:15:42Paragraphs please and learn to spell.cs1177Report 2009-06-24 23:50:13Not a terrible story content-wise. Blowjob sex I would recommend you fix grammar, spelling, and indenting if you are wanting to write more stories. Also remember quotation marks, those make it easier to read and know what is dialogue and what is not. Also remember quotation marks, those make it easier to read and know what is dialogue and what is not. Also remember quotation marks, those make it easier to read and know what is dialogue and what is not. But like I said, the content was great.«1»
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