3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-11-19 19:46:30I agree, this has the makings of a really nice romantic story. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-11-19 19:46:30I agree, this has the makings of a really nice romantic story. Blowjob sex I’d really hate to see this story end before it had a chance to be a really good story. Seriously the only reason it’s gettin’ such low rating marks, is it’s so totally screwed up grammar wise.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-15 10:05:28Your writing sucks. Knowing when to put in quotes and how make the reader know for sure who’s sayin’ what. I go along with all the other people that are not happy with your grammar. I go along with all the other people that are not happy with your grammar. IF only there was a way to get in touch with you and have you send me the story, let me make corrections, then send it back to you.
