Great story. Blowjob sex OHT- Thanks for the support, it’s always appreciated but I thought even the least tactful had something to say worth thinking about. I just assumed most people’s thoughts were choppy like mine. The breaks with ID could help, maintain the rotation through the characters. The breaks with ID could help, maintain the rotation through the characters. I think I should have only changed POV’s a couple of times there. I’ll try to write the sex if I can’t avoid it. Damn the consequences and space each paragraph as much as you want. All of your comments are my big thing, thank you again.hornyelkReport 2011-03-10 19:05:57I liked the changing viewpoints, which at first were a bit unclear. u’r critics a PITA! Top marks from me! great POV x’s 4.
